bronze_ribbons: knife with bronze ribbons (feather)
Ribbons ([personal profile] bronze_ribbons) wrote2006-12-01 12:33 pm
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  • Current Mood: happy

good things

  • My poem "Fist" is now up at flashquake.


  • I have antibiotics now. Bronchitis begone!


  • I get my car back today.


  • Lynne Rae Perkins's Criss Cross.


  • Hot chocolate.
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    [identity profile] schemingreader.livejournal.com 2006-12-01 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
    That is a wonderful poem: nice and tight, but not too dense--easy to follow and envision the central image. I like the rock-paper-scissors at the end--a nice way to turn the metaphor over.

    I really like your work!

    [identity profile] nigita.livejournal.com 2006-12-01 09:30 pm (UTC)(link)
    The second-to-last stanza evokes the grace of my deaf friends' language.
    This is, indeed, how their hands speak.
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