good things

[bronze_ribbons]

My poem "Fist" is now up at flashquake.

I have antibiotics now. Bronchitis begone!

I get my car back today.

Lynne Rae Perkins's Criss Cross.

Hot chocolate.

Comments

[schemingreader.livejournal.com]

That is a wonderful poem: nice and tight, but not too dense--easy to follow and envision the central image. I like the rock-paper-scissors at the end--a nice way to turn the metaphor over.

I really like your work!

[mechaieh.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much -- I'm so glad it made sense! (You might be amused by this: in the feedback they sent, one editor wrote "Thank God for titles!")

[nigita.livejournal.com]

The second-to-last stanza evokes the grace of my deaf friends' language.
This is, indeed, how their hands speak.

[mechaieh.livejournal.com]

Mmm - I like that it does that. Thank you for the thought and the reading!