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Ribbons ([personal profile] bronze_ribbons) wrote2008-12-02 10:12 pm
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DOUBLE DRABBLE for odogoddess (Luna/Severus, R)

This is for [insanejournal.com profile] odogoddess, who wished for "post-DH forced bonding, marriage law type, Snape *must* marry fic. Virgin Snape. Angst. Wedding night awkwardness. Happy or hopeful ending. Any partner except: any DE, any Ministry person, elves. Link to your favourites with this theme are appreciated. Prefer smut, no gen." I think I fit most of that in... ;-)


Life Force


When Severus regained consciousness, he first batted away the radish his wife had been holding under his nose. Then he let his head fall back to the ground in despair: life had never treated him fairly, but its entrapping Luna into marrying him seemed like an especially cruel prank.

She was gazing at him, however, with neither disdain nor disgust, but a kind of concern that baffled him. He waited, tense, as she matter-of-factly shed her robe and Banished his. Before he had time to react to the sudden chill, she'd stretched out on top of him, pulling the covers over them both.

"This can't be what you dreamed of when you were a girl," Severus croaked out, his hands clutching the sheet beneath them.

"It wasn't," Luna replied, gently undulating against him. "It's much better than I'd hoped."

Severus bitterly said, "Because I couldn't do anything to you out cold?"

"You are being wholly illogical. That was no fun at all." Luna lightly tugged at one of his nipples, her eyes alight as he gasped at the unfamiliar pleasure. A long astonished moan escaped him as she licked around the other, and his hands reached up toward her hips.

[identity profile] bronze_ribbons.insanejournal.com 2008-12-05 09:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad they came across as in character - I'm a bit out of practice with HP these days! *sending huge hugs to you and careful hugs to O.*

[identity profile] odogoddess.insanejournal.com 2008-12-06 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, thank you! That's so lovely. You captured their voices quite well, including inner voice for Severus, the poor angst-riddled dear. You brought a smile to my face. *hugs back, careful to avoid squishing any of my myriad bruises*

[identity profile] bronze_ribbons.insanejournal.com 2008-12-08 11:13 am (UTC)(link)
*beams* Mission accomplished! *sends fresh waves of get-well-soon vibes your way*