a quick drabble for [personal profile] cordelia_v

6/1/08 01:44
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Happy birthday, my dear. May you enjoy good health, good books, and many other felicities the whole year 'round.

[100 words, G, Alys/Simon with a hint of past Bunter/Alys. ;-) ]


There was a vase of red flowers in their room. The bouquet had looked perfect to him when he turned on the lights, but it looked even better after Alys glided up to it and rearranged three of the blooms.

Her compulsive competence contained an invisible edge that intrigued him, but he'd held off asking where she'd honed her skills. Later, she showed him several vid pix of herself dressed in a peculiar costume, carefully rinsing and drying porcelain ornaments.

"Someone who understood you took those," he murmured.

"Yes," she said, and she let her head rest against his shoulder.
Posted by [identity profile] cordelia_v.insanejournal.com
Her compulsive competence contained an invisible edge that intrigued him

Oh, perfect. In a nutshell. For both Alys and Bunter, when I stop to think of it.

Thank you so very much! What a nice way to kick off my birthday!

Posted by [identity profile] bronze_ribbons.insanejournal.com
You're welcome! Here's to the rest of the year! :-)

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8/1/08 04:33 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] lyras.insanejournal.com
it looked even better after Alys glided up to it and rearranged three of the blooms

Just, yes. So Alys; so true. And I love the idea of Alys/Bunter - they would have made a fascinating couple!

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8/1/08 16:46 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bronze_ribbons.insanejournal.com
Competence is one of my bulletproof kinks. Very glad you enjoyed this!

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20/1/08 23:47 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] firefly124.insanejournal.com
Her compulsive competence contained an invisible edge that intrigued him

That really seems to sum up both Alys and Alys/Simon very well. Very nice drabble!

One question, as apparently I'm a bit thick. Who's Bunter?

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21/1/08 08:03 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] bronze_ribbons.insanejournal.com
Thank you!

Not thick - Bunter is from Dorothy L. Sayers's mystery novels. He's compulsively competent as well, and [insanejournal.com profile] cordelia_v was much taken with my suggestion (http://bronze-ribbons.insanejournal.com/101055.html) that he and Alys ought to share a fic. Even though they are from different centuries and planets...

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21/1/08 14:15 (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] firefly124.insanejournal.com
Ah! Neat idea. And why let a little thing like time and space get in the way of a good crossover? :-)